There are grammatical and spelling mistakes.
There is a inconsistency with the name of the slave; at the start the slave was Raju and towards the end he was called Ramu.
Raghuram laughing loudly at the end does not sound correct. It is better to use 'Raghuram felt sorry for his slave Ramu'.
Raghuram and Raju/Ramu are Indian names, so you can use any Indian places such as Jaipur instead of Baghdad.